The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries?
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There is a table of information based on United Nations statistics resources in four countries during 1994 about the quality of life of citizens in that country.
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Japan
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has the highest indicators in all aspects except daily calorie used per person and the lowest numbers come from Zaire. For annual income per capita,
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is on first rank with 15,760 $ for individuals followed by Canada at 11,100 $. Meanwhile, Peru and Zaire had the smallest income in the range below 200 $.
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, the
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continued
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on life expectancy at birth, for
Japan
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at 78 points and
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position
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at 47 points.
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, for daily calorie consumers, Canada had switched the
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to be number one with 3326 cal per day and
Japan
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became the second
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with almost 500 cal of difference. Afterwards, other countries only consumed less than 2,000 cal.
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of the data, the literacy rate for citizens in Canada and
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was everyone almost could read,
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Peru had two-thirds and the
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position
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with only one-third of their population of the country.
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  • indicators
  • population
  • GDP per capita
  • life expectancy
  • literacy rate
  • infant mortality rate
  • prosperous
  • less developed
  • level of education
  • healthcare
  • improvements
  • services
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