The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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recognition

of well-known

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Instagram

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acounts

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accounts

in 2018 and 2021.

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, all accounts approximately had

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level of

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Instagram

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instagram

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influencers in 2018, and it increased to about 250

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in 2021, except Cristiano Ronaldo

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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bar chart
popularity
Instagram accounts
growth
decline
comparison
remained stable
significant change
new entries
exits
patterns
trends
noteworthy
notable
fluctuation
predominant
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