The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Truc Linh

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illustrate

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the process of producing

cheese

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overall

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, making

cheese

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is

man-made

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a man-made

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linear process.It includes 10

step

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steps

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, commencing with fresh

milk

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and matured

cheese

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is

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at is

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end

production

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of production

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Concerning the first 4

stage

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stages

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, they will select filter raw

milk

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and fill

vat

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the vat

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to

pasteuriz

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pasteurised

milk

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. After that would be rennet addition, which will coagulate the

milk

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. It

sit

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disturbed so it sets and makes.

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, followed by cutting and halving the curds and

wheys

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whey

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,which are

latter

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later

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cooked for 5

hour

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hours

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. Regarding the

last

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five

stage

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stages

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, the whey is drained out , the curd is milled and salted, fashion fresh

cheese

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.

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is.

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Next,

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the process when

the

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apply

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pouring into molds and pressing to

draining of

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drain

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additional whey.

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Last

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The last

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step, ripening

cheese

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and hooping to

consumer

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consumers

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