The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates the total of
shop
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closures
and openings in the years 2011 to 2018.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shop
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closures
experienced a slight decline over the years except for one great fall in 2015. Use synonyms
While
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,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of new Use synonyms
shops
showed a dramatic decrease on the same mentioned period.
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According to
the data, in 2011 the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shop
openings exceeded the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
shop
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closures
with just below 9000 Use synonyms
shops
. Use synonyms
Whereas
, that Linking Words
number
dropped in 2012 reaching 4000 Use synonyms
shops
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
number
had a gradual elevation till 2014 as it reached around 6000. Use synonyms
However
, they went into another drop in 2015 with 4000 Linking Words
shops
. Use synonyms
Although
, they stayed constant in 2016 and 2017 but declined again slightly to 3000 in 2018.
Meanwhile, Linking Words
shop
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closures
increased slightly in 2013 with nearly 7000 Use synonyms
shops
. Use synonyms
While
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,
they started to decrease in 2014 until they had a significant fall in 2015 reaching almost 500 Remove the comma
apply
shops
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
increased again in 2016 to reach 5000 Use synonyms
shops
and had a steady trend across the later years (2017 and 2018) with approximately 5000 Use synonyms
shops
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shop, closures, number, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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