The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011
The line graph illustrates information about
group
of people Add an article
a group
the group
in
different Change preposition
of
age
who used to go to the cinema several times in a country that Fix the agreement mistake
ages
located
in Europe between 2000 to 2011. Add a missing verb
was located
Overall
, what Linking Words
stand
out from the graph is that the percentage of people who are under 35 Change the verb form
stands
have been
fluctuated over the past 11 years. Wrong verb form
has
While
the line that Linking Words
represent
35 years and over had growth to 10 percent and 2011.
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represents
According to
the graph, the group that between 25 to 35 and seven 214 years are having close presented over the period with the fluctuated increase.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
15
to 42 group Correct article usage
the 15
is
increased slightly from 2000 to 2006 Unnecessary verb
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then
the percentage rose Charli to Linking Words
be
50% in 2007.Unnecessary verb
apply
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