The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the revenue of Southland's main exports in three different periods of time: 200, 20.., and 2025.
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, the chart shows that over the years the presence of holidaymakers in the city has given more profits to the city
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the revenue for international tourism was $8,000,000 and since
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to 2025 those numbers increased to $10,000,000.
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, the exports of dairy products began generating $7,000,000,
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they
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peak point at $10,000,000, to
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fall
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$9,000,000.
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, the only cluster that shows a constant decrease
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meat products, because its profits started at $6,000,000 and ended up at $5,000,000. After taking all the details, we can conclude that between the three
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the one that has generated the
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income is international tourism, and the one that has
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the lowest earnings is the
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exportation
of meat products.
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