The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the bar chart given illustrates five different noticeable well-known Instagram accounts popularity by
millions
in 2018 and 2021. As a general scenario, in three years public had more interest among of five influencers and showed Use synonyms
more
than double increase.
As can be seen in the bar chart, Selena Gomez had Correct article usage
a more
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
followers
in 2018 more than 100 Correct quantifier usage
number of followers
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
while
The Rock had Linking Words
least
under 100 Correct article usage
the least
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
However
, in 2021 Cristiano Ronaldo rose significantly and Linking Words
got
more than three times bigger around 100 to 300 to Verb problem
became
be highest
well-known human Verb problem
became the most
in
Instagram by society. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, in 2021 except Linking Words
Ronaldo
rest of the celebrities were nearly Change preposition
for Ronaldo
same
around 250 Correct article usage
the same
Use synonyms
millions
yet, Selena Gomez couldn't Change to singular
million
approached
it Change the verb form
approach
while
she was the highest in 2018.
Linking Words
In addition
, Kylie Jenner was Linking Words
lesser
than Ariana Grande around 100 and 120 Correct word choice
less
Use synonyms
millions
respectively in the former even though they Change to singular
million
become
Wrong verb form
became
same
Correct article usage
the same
in
three years ahead. Change preposition
apply
Lastly
, The Rock Linking Words
was
the Verb problem
had
least
proportion in 2018 Correct word choice
lowest
nevertheless
, he surpassed them except Ronaldo by getting over 250 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
in 2021.Change to singular
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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