The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow a city in Scotland in 2010.
The bar charts and pie charts illustrate key information about the degrees of education in Glasgow, Scotland, in 2010.
Overall
, it clear from the graphs that, the most of students were had a school certificate, Linking Words
in addition
, the distribution for women and men was similar.
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According to
ages from 16 to 50 years old, the ratio of them was almost comparable, which was the percentages for a student who has a school grade in 70%, Linking Words
while
the University degree was lower, Linking Words
moreover
, those who didn’t learn was the least account for 9%.
In terms of spreading for gender seems they were equal, regarding the people who have a school certificate in both of them experienced 33%, appears the people who have bachelor's degrees were nearly similar. Linking Words
However
, there is a significant difference related to Linking Words
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