In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to recuce it ?

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to a waste of money and edibles. Another pivotal aspect of
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products items like plastic cutlery, cups and plates,
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on disposable items
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junk mountains. Steps to deal with
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and patronize stores offering package-free goods will suppress packaging waste. To recapitulate,
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