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Band 5.5

to what extent has the internet made life more convenient? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Internet
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The Internet
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 has been one
the
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of the
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 greatest
invention
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inventions
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 of
the
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apply
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humankind and
changing
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changes
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 our lives on
daily
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a daily
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 basis. It has made
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people
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people's
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life
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lives
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 easier. I completely agree with the statement.
This
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Internet
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The Internet
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 is a blessing that comes up with
lot
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 of benefits.
Firstly
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,
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it
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 connected
people
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 around the world.
People
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 can make new friends, date online,
even
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and even
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 connect to their family and friends from any corner of the world.
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,
application
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applications
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such
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instagram
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 and
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
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 that
works
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work
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 on
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internet
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the internet
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 help
people
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 to post their daily lives and to virtually connect to their loved ones when they are very far away.
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, online shopping saves
times
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time
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 and
increase
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increases
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 efficiency. Rather than going to a store
physical
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physically
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 and wasting time
in
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apply
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commuting, individuals can look for everything which is available online on the websites and can order it in minutes.
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, during
boxing day
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Boxing Day
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 in Canada, there is
lot
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a lot
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 of rush in the stores
due to
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sale
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sales
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 and discounts. The same discounts are available online on the brand websites and
people
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 opt out
for
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of
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 purchasing things online
sitting
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while sitting
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 at their homes
that
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which
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 saves them from
unneccessary
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unnecessary
 hustle.
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,
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Internet
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had
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has
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 made a huge impact on the
worklife
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work life
work-life
 of
the
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apply
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people
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 as well. There is no longer
need
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a need
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 to meet in person to
diccuss
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discuss
 topics or have meetings. It can be done from home and from remote places.
This
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 has helped
people
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saving
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save
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 their time.
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, during
Covid-19
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COVID-19
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, when all the offices were closed, individuals were working from home and having meetings online
that had
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which
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 saved many businesses from shutting down.
Although
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,
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internet
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the internet
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 is a boon to
people
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 and changed the world for good
but
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, everything comes up with its own negative impacts that
has
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 to be considered and taken into account.

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language
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content
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content
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