The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows the planning of a new school in Canterbury town for two sites S1 and S2.
Overall
, as can be seen, S1 had a significant point in the area it took all scarves approximately Linking Words
such
as: main Linking Words
roads
, university, housing, and town centre. Use synonyms
However
, S2 is in the middle centre near the main Linking Words
roads
only.
Use synonyms
According to
the data, S1 is a famous area. It had different categories. Linking Words
Firstly
, be located in the countryside in east north near the main Linking Words
roads
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the houses across from S1 in the west said. Linking Words
In addition
, S1 sites near the university from the north aspect. The town centre be located next to S1. Finely, S1 had the largest number of Population around 7,000.
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On the other hand
, S2 had 4.500 from population less than S1. Linking Words
To begin
with, S2 be located on the south line near to main Linking Words
roads
southwest. Use synonyms
Secondly
, S2 had 7 km to arrive countryside. North side there are universities.On the east side, S1 is located . Linking Words
Finally
, S2 is located around and near housing.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words roads with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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