The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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informations

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in different cities worldwide.

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London

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has the tallest

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a significant difference

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the other countries. The

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is for Kyoto. Two

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opened in the 80s century, which are

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and Paris.

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is 1100 km tall with

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half of the highest for Paris.

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Paris train has a larger

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train with 850

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per year and 548

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, respectively. In the 90s, Tokyo, Washington DC, and Kyoto each introduced

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stations. Tokyo and Washington DC metros have a tall

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of each

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than 100

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annually.

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is 11 km tall and

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. Los Angeles

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was the

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operated, it was in 2001

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and has constructed

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14 km tall and can take only 90

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people per year

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The table below provides statistics on several major metro(MRT) system aroun dthe world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, many people have to work for longer hours, asd they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can the employers do to make their lives easier?

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this? What can be done to attract local people?

Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet.

Some poeople say History is one of the most important school subject and people think that, in todays;s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion