Task1 The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
These pie charts compare the amount of money they spend in the years
of
1950 and 2010. It is clear from the graphs that they put their salary on Housing.
Change preposition
apply
According to
what is shown, in 1950 Linking Words
the
Housing Correct article usage
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takes
space around three quarts which was 50.1 more than in the year Wrong verb form
took
of
2010. Change preposition
apply
However
, the Linking Words
least
one was health care with only 2.4 Correct your spelling
last
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
in the year Linking Words
of
2010 happens a bit of Change preposition
apply
changing
in what they put their money, from what is shown food was the highest one with Replace the word
change
thirty four
percent. And the Add a hyphen
thirty-four
seconed
highest was housing . The education rate was similar for both years with only 0.3%.
Correct your spelling
second
To sum up
, we could say that the most Linking Words
significat diffrence
was Other with approximately over ten Correct your spelling
significant difference
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
diffrent
.Correct your spelling
difference
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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