The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
The line charts provide key information about employment in countries between the ages 60-64 between men and women from the
years
1970 to 2000. The units are measured in the percentages.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the highest percentage of the Linking Words
men's
and women from the age 60-64 were in Japan between the year 1970 and 2000 , Change noun form
men
whereas
the females in Beigium were the lowest in both Linking Words
years
.
Use synonyms
According to
what is shown, male workers were higher in the year 1970 in all of the countries but lower at Beigium by 2000.
In Japan, the two Linking Words
years
were almost the same within the two Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
As well as
USA Linking Words
approximately
lesser in 2000 than in 1970 Add a missing verb
was approximately
as well as
Australia.
In terms of Japan and the USA were similar to each other by 1970 and 2000 Linking Words
in addition
Australia and Belgium were nearly the same Linking Words
from
1970 and 2000Change preposition
between
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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