The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features,andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features,andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates a report that was published in 2008 providing information about the amount of
energy
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consumed in the USA by
petrol
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and
oil
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,coal,natural gas,nuclear,solar/wind,and
hydropower
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from 1980 to 2025, with a foreseen of 2030.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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of
energy
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by fuel in the US has increased,where the fuel that was the most popular used was
petrol
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and
oil
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,
while
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hydropower
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was the least. In 1980,
petrol
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and
oil
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were the most used
fuels
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which was 35
quadrillion
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,
then
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the
consumption
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fluctuated making it unstable until 2005, when the
energy
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consumed was 40
quadrillion
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. Yet,
Petrol
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and
oil
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consumption
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increased sharply reaching 50
quadrillion
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in 2030.
On the other hand
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, nuclear,solar/wind,and
hydropower
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fuels
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accounted for only 5
quadrillion
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.
However
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,
energy
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consumption
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experienced a rapid rise in nuclear
fuels
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throughout the period
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and will reach under 10
quadrillion
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units in 2030.
Hydropower
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consumption
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varied between 1980 and 2010,but still less than 5
quadrillion
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units, and
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will remain stable up until 2030. In 1980, the
energy
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consumption
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of coal and natural gas
fuels
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was 20 and 15
quadrillion
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respectively.
Energy
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consumption
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of coal experienced a sudden increase, but
then
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the
energy
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used remained unchanged between 1995 and 2005.
However
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,
energy
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consumption
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increased sharply and it will reach 30
quadrillion
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units in 2030.
On the other hand
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, the US
consumption
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of natural gas was unstable throughout the period from 1980 to 2015 where
then
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it will remain stable until 2030,of under 25
quadrillion
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energy
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consumption
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. what band do you give
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, petrol, oil, hydropower, consumption, fuels, quadrillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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