In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
If the
state
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increase
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increases
taxes
for private vehicles, the nation will use that money to Use synonyms
built
roads and buy Change the form of the verb
build
news
buses for the country. Correct your spelling
new
However
, there are some benefits and drawbacks if the government impose Linking Words
such
a rule in the nation.
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Firstly
, a disadvantage to consider is that, though the government is heavily taxing private Linking Words
onwers
of the autos Correct your spelling
owners
and
they are suffering a lot since they are paying other Correct word choice
apply
state
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taxes
not only for the cars. To give a clear example, in the UK, people are paying more cash to the Use synonyms
country
organisation and Change noun form
country's
left
with less, so they are compensating another amount and they will just live without saving for their future lives. Add a missing verb
are left
Secondly
, if the government demands heavy Linking Words
tax
for the van owners, Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
car
dealers will Use synonyms
also
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getting
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get
be getting
less number of
buyers because many humans will run away from their Fix the agreement mistake
fewer
vehicle
and use public transport that Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
are
affordable, Change the verb form
is
therefore
, they should lower the Linking Words
taxes
to support Use synonyms
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car
business.
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the car
On the other hand
, there are some outnumbered advantages to the authority when they Linking Words
are
increase duty to private Unnecessary verb
apply
car
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holder
because that money will be used to beautify roads and buy electrical public transport. Fix the agreement mistake
holders
For instance
, in Europe, many countries are now using Linking Words
electrical
buses and rails and Replace the word
electric
the
society Correct article usage
apply
are
enjoying that luxurious life. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
In addition
, public Linking Words
bus
and trains are very important to Fix the agreement mistake
buses
the
humans, especially to those who can not afford to buy their own mobile, Correct article usage
apply
hence
, Linking Words
this
clearly shows that it will be a benefit to others if the Linking Words
state
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rise up
the Verb problem
raises
taxes
to the Use synonyms
carowners
.
Correct your spelling
car owners
To conclude
, solving traffic problems using private Linking Words
car
owner Use synonyms
taxes
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it
is an advantage to the Correct pronoun usage
apply
state
and the population, on the other side, vehicle sellers will be disadvantaged because the community will not Use synonyms
capable
to drive their own cars Correct your spelling
be able
due to
expenses.Linking Words
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