In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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If the
state
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increase
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taxes
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for private vehicles, the nation will use that money to
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roads and buy
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buses for the country.
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, there are some benefits and drawbacks if the government impose
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a rule in the nation.
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, a disadvantage to consider is that, though the government is heavily taxing private
onwers
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owners
of the autos
and
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they are suffering a lot since they are paying other
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taxes
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not only for the cars. To give a clear example, in the UK, people are paying more cash to the
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organisation and
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with less, so they are compensating another amount and they will just live without saving for their future lives.
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, if the government demands heavy
tax
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taxes
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for the van owners,
car
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dealers will
also
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getting
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less number of
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buyers because many humans will run away from their
vehicle
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vehicles
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and use public transport that
are
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affordable,
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, they should lower the
taxes
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to support
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car
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business.
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, there are some outnumbered advantages to the authority when they
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increase duty to private
car
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holder
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because that money will be used to beautify roads and buy electrical public transport.
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, in Europe, many countries are now using
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buses and rails and
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society
are
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enjoying that luxurious life.
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, public
bus
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buses
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and trains are very important to
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humans, especially to those who can not afford to buy their own mobile,
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,
this
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clearly shows that it will be a benefit to others if the
state
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rise up
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the
taxes
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to the
carowners
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car owners
.
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, solving traffic problems using private
car
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owner
taxes
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it
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is an advantage to the
state
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and the population, on the other side, vehicle sellers will be disadvantaged because the community will not
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be able
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to drive their own cars
due to
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expenses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traffic congestion
  • Emissions
  • Revenue generation
  • Public dissatisfaction
  • Political issues
  • Financial burden
  • Environmental benefits
  • Efficiency and accessibility
  • Taxation
  • Heavily taxing
  • Private car owners
  • Fund improvements
  • Discourage the use
  • Healthier environment
  • Public transport quality
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