You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter explain what you would like to do explain what kind of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I hope you are doing well in Canada. I am writing

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letter to tell you that I have decided to join a study course in your current home city Surrey. I am looking to

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admission

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Mount International College and pursue my Master's in Computer Applications. I have been trying to find a suitable institute with

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academic and job placement history. I completed my Bachelor's in Computer Applications back in 2022 and I have been working with a local company ever since. Because

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I want to gain some practical experience before taking a master's course.

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, I did not have enough financial resources to support my studies. I was wondering if you could help

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little by enquiring about Mount International College.

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, it would be more favourable if you could visit the college and ask them about

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course. I hope you will help me

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of your abilities. I am looking forward to hearing from you as well. Best Wishes, Jatinder.

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single idea per paragraph

You could break down the second paragraph into two separate ideas: first discussing the course, then elaborating on your past studies and work experience. This separation would enhance the clarity and focus.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph presents a single clear idea. Although your paragraphs are generally focused, the second paragraph includes multiple ideas that could be split for improved coherence.

suitable writing tone

You've used an appropriate and friendly tone throughout the letter, which is well-suited for personal correspondence while maintaining a clear purpose.

logical structure

The structure of your letter follows a clear and logical progression, with a greeting, a detailed explanation of your intent, background, request for assistance, and a proper closing.

complete response

You have included all the necessary details in your response: explaining your intentions, background, and a request for assistance.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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