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The bar graph shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries. between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relavent.

The bar graph shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries. between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relavent.
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The given bar graph illustrates the
growth
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 in average
prices
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 of properties in percentage in three different countries from 2007 to 2010.
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, in Algeria, the
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 decreased
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 in China, the
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 increased.
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, in Argentina, the
growth
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 in average
prices
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 of
property
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 experienced fluctuations. In Algeria, in 2007, the
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 was above 6%, and it decreased to roughly 4.5% in 2008. In 2010, the
growth
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property
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prices
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 Algeria reached around 3%. Meanwhile, in China, the
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 was around 2% in 2007, and it increased to above 4% in 2008. The
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 in China reached above 6% in 2010. In Argentina, the
growth
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 in average
property
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prices
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 stood at above 3% in 2007, and it increased to approximately 4.9% in 2008.
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, the
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 in average
property
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prices
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 experienced a dramatic decline and reached around 1.5% in 2009. The
growth
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 slightly increased to around 2.7% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth, prices, property with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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