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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map of
town
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the town
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center
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centre
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 demonstrates how the construction of the
city
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 has changed from 1990 to the present.
Firstly
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, the
city
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 still has had 4 main roads consisting of Newton
Street
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, Smith
Street
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, Green
Street
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, and Oldfield
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street
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Street
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. On
the
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Smith
Street
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, there is a shopping mall, where located next to the Childcare
center
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centre
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 and
opposit
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opposite
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 the
city
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's park,
that
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which
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 used to be the place that provided many types of shops,
for instance
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, a Cafe, a Butcher's, a Baker's, a Grocer's, and a Newagent's.
Moreover
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, many houses that belonged to
the
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Green
Street
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 in 1990
has
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were
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 constructed to be apartment blocks.
In addition
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, The
city
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 has built more
cross roads
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crossroads
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 on Green
Street
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 and
the
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Oldfield
Street
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, which they did not have in 1990.
Lastly
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, despite the car was allowed to pass on
the
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Smith
Street
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 in 1990, the town centre only gives
the
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permission for walking
only
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apply
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in now
adays
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future
.
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