The picture below show how tomato ketchup is made. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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deliniate

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delineate

how tomato

ketchup

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is made. There are 15 distinct stages

initiates

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beginning

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with harvesting

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tomatoes

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and ending with applying delicious sausage alongside your meal.

initially

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tomatoes

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are harvested and placed into baskets. At

this

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point, categorizing the quality of

tomatoes

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has begun. Appropriate

tomatoes

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are sent to the relevant factory. Once, undesirable components

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as seeds are extricated from

tomatoes

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, the crushing process is started. In

this

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stage sugar and

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apply

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other spices can be added in order to balance the

flavor

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. After

boiling

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the boiling

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process, the mixture

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allowed for two hours to get cold. In

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phase,

cold

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a cold

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combination is poured

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into

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a suitable

ketchup

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container and placed into the boxes forwarding to supermarkets. In the final section, the production of tomato

ketchup

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has been done and in case of purchasing a tomato

ketchup

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, you can enjoy additional

flavor

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beside

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besides

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your meal, which

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apply

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could be your hamburger and fries.

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task achievement

Ensure all stages of the process are accurately and comprehensively described, particularly focusing on stages that are skipped or under-elaborated.

task achievement

Provide clear, specific details to help convey each stage more vividly and accurately.

coherence cohesion

Ensure connections between ideas and stages are more clearly and logically articulated to guide the reader smoothly through the description.

language use

Double-check for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance visibility and readability.

structure

Good introduction and conclusion that describe the general process of making tomato ketchup.

coherence cohesion

Steps are generally in chronological order, providing a rational sequence.

task achievement

The essay provides an overall understanding of how tomato ketchup is made, touching on key processes.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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The picture below show how tomato ketchup is made. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people have health problems because they chose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What are the reasons and solutions?

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people's attention to art? The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.