The diagram below shows the process of making cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Công Thành
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
cheese
from Use synonyms
milk
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the production includes eleven steps. Linking Words
Firstly
is pasteurization and Linking Words
finally
is ripening. Making Linking Words
cheese
Use synonyms
and
is Correct word choice
apply
the
line process Correct article usage
a
by
man-made
In the first step , raw Change preposition
of
milk
was pasteurized.The Use synonyms
milk
is put into a machine which pasteurized the raw Use synonyms
milk
and standardization and filtration .Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
milk
is poured into a basin . They will pour some liquid into it , which is named Renet( enzyme) and has fermenting microorganisms . After 30 minutes to 2 hours, Use synonyms
milk
will curdle . Continue , they will cut the curd into small pieces like corn and stir and cook it . In the next step, cheesemakers will dehydrate the Use synonyms
cheese
by draining it . After the curds become smooth in the machine Use synonyms
milk
is mixed with salt which makes fresh Use synonyms
cheese
. But it is not the end. They pour into the box. Use synonyms
Finally
, they put the boxes on the shelf and wait for the Linking Words
cheese
to ripen and finish.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese, milk with synonyms.
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