General training - -Formal letter You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year old child.Write a letter to the parents .In your letter -explain why would like the job -give details why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter regarding the job that you have posted in an Australian magazine. I am looking for accommodation and a daycare position,
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I saw your advertisement online yesterday. I would love to have a chance to live with your family and take care of the kids. I am suitable for
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job because I have one year of experience in
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daycare and know how to handle toddlers very well. I used to handle kids from ages 1 to 10. I believe that
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job will provide me with a wonderful experience in Australia. I can spend my leisure time with kids
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as doing outdoor activities and learning new skills. I look forward to hearing positive news! Your faithful, HK
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task achievement
Avoid repeating similar phrases (e.g., 'take care of the kids'/'handle toddlers'). Consider varying your wording to enrich your response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph expresses a single idea clearly. Sometimes, ideas can merge or appear abrupt without proper linking words.
task achievement
You have successfully addressed all prompts requested in the task, making sure your intentions, experience and plans are clear.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were appropriately formal and polite, matching the purpose of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • caregiver
  • childcare experience
  • passion for children
  • responsibility
  • patience
  • commitment
  • cultural immersion
  • local environment
  • community engagement
  • flexibility
  • references
  • qualifications
  • volunteer work
  • educational background
  • suitable candidate
  • enthusiasm
  • positive impact
  • personal attributes
  • willingness
  • explore
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