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diagram shows ethanol production summarize

diagram shows ethanol production summarize
The flowchart provides key information on the process of producing biofuel which is
ethanol
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.
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, it is clear from the chart that manufacturing
ethanol
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 is a cyclic operation that requires several steps starting from growing plants and
trees
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, harvesting them using
special
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a special
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 device and entering the pre-process level,
ending
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and ending
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 with processing
ethanol
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 by adding certain ingredients to manufacture biofuel.
According to
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 what is shown, the operation
begin
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begins
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 with crushing plants and
trees
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 to extract the carbon dioxide from
trees
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. After that the pre-processing level starts, they
breakdown
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break down
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 the crushed part of
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trees
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the trees
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 to reach the extraction level and use
tree’s
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the tree’s
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 cellulose in processing
ethanol
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. In terms of
processing
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the processing
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 phase, once cellulose
turned
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is turned
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 into sugar they
subsequently
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 add microbes so that
ethanol
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be
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is
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 ready to use. The fuel of transportation methods
are
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apply
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depend on
ethanol
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such
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 as planes, trucks and cars. The modes that society
use
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uses
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 for transportation
imposeed
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imposed
impose
 carbon dioxide which
affect
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apply
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positively on plants and
trees
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 growing.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, trees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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