The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.

The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.
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pie illustrates that how was the changes in
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costs in several sections in 1966 and 1996.
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, in comparison with 1996, some groups had an increase in a way that for the computer group was dramatic, and for the car and restaurant was remarkable.
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, other groups had notable decreases
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as food and books and the alteration of petrol and furniture in
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section was trivial. Regarding the groups that had growth in payments in 1996, the computer sector (that had the lowest percentage in 1966) with ten folded charges had the highest change with 10% and car (the highest amount in
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year) and restaurant part
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became around two folded 45%, 14% respectively.
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, the
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food with 44% was the highest degree among the people in 1966,
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to approximately one-third in 1996. The relation's cost of books with 1% as the lowest proportion in 1996 had fallen one-sixth time in comparison with 1966.The petrol and furniture section had trivial modifications of 1 to 2 per cent in order.

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