The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the development of the village named Ryemouth from 1995 to these days.
Overall
, a significant number of public or private spaces and facilities were transformed or removed. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, some of them remained and some new conveniences were provided.
First of all, on the territory which consisted of land that was used for agriculture and a forest park a place for golf was made. Linking Words
Also
, some tennis courts were built. Linking Words
This
area was reduced. The road that was near the housing area was dismantled. Linking Words
Furthermore
, buildings in which people could find shops changed to restaurants. In the same Linking Words
way
the fish market was transformed into apartments. The fishing port was Add a comma
way,
also
removed.
Turning to what stayed the same up to nowadays, the cafe and the hotel which is near to it remained. The territory where the housing area was situated Linking Words
also
stayed. Linking Words
Moreover
, the number of private houses increased dramatically. What is more, a car park was provided next to the hotel.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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