45.The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart depicts and compares different utilization of mobile phone owners in a developing region in four years from 2006 to 2010.

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, what stands out is that mobile devices have been used primarily to contact others throughout the years.

On the other hand

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, the least popular feature of smartphones was video recording. By looking at the details,

it is clear that

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the most pivotal feature of phones was contacting via calls, with 100% from 2006 to 2008 and a marginal decline to 99% in 2010.

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, communication by sending and receiving texts was second with 73% and showed a slight rise to 79% in 2010.

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was followed by using smart devices to take pictures and surf the internet, with 76% and 73%, respectively.

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, the percentage of games and video-capturing features went up significantly in 2010, with 41% and 35%, respectively. Listening to music using cell phones had the lowest share in all years, starting at 12%,

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doubling to 26% in 2010. There was no information related to internet searches or video recordings in 2006.

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45.The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Some people think that to produce a happier society we must ensure that there is only a small difference in earnings between rich and poor. To what extend do you agree?

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You left a jacket behind at a restaurant you went to recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In the letter •describe the jacket •explain when you visited the restaurant and where you were sitting •say want you want the manager to do.