The line graph shows the proportion of total exports of clothing in 4 different countries in 2000 to 2014.

The line graph shows the proportion of total exports of clothing in 4 different countries in 2000 to 2014.
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The line graph below gives information about data on total exports producing clothes in four different countries from 2000 to 2014.
Overall
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, it can be seen that China only increased for several years,
while
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European Union services mostly continued to decrease. Looking at the details, in the half of 2000 Chinese states started with about 15 per cent.
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,
at the end
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of 2014, the number was more than 35. At the same time,
firstly
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, the European government had around 32 per cent,
then
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the quota was slowly reduced and in 2010 it was less than 25.
Moreover
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, the clothing sector continued to fall over time.
Nevertheless
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, Asia's development (except for China) from 2000 to 2002 speedily diminished (from 30 to about 17) ,
after
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this
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, the line step by step picked up through the years.
Therefore
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,at
first,
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the USA production had rapid changes but in 2014 the output was low at 5%.
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