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The charts show the election results for a European country in 2015 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the election results for a European country in 2015 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs provide a
proportion
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 of information about
election
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the election
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 findings of a country in Europe during a specific period (2015 and 2019) in five different sectors: The Liberal
Party
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, the Conservative
Party
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, the Freedom
Party
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, the National
Party
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 and the Green
Party
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. The
votes
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 in 2015 are illustrated in the first
chart
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,
while
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 the
votes
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 in 2019 are illustrated in the
second
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chart
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.
Overall
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, the
proportion
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 of the shares of
votes
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 is relatively variable for both the period 2015 and 2019. Turning to the first
chart
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, we can observe that, most of the shares of
votes
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 are Liberal
Party
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 in almost two-thirds of the
proportion
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 (62%), with the Conservative
Party
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 in
second
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 place with exactly a quarter (25%).
In contrast
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, the situation is different in 2019. By taking a closer look at the
second
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chart
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 we can observe that the Liberal
Party
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 is in first place at just above half of the
proportion
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 (51%),
while
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 the Green
Party
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 is in
second
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 place at about (14%).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, party, votes, chart, second with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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