The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps provide key information about the Town of Stromer, highlighting substantial development, with several features either or transformed constructed.

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, it is clear from the maps that the town has

been

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undergone significant improvements.

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, in 1995 the plan

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a variety of facilities

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the current layout offers a number of services

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school

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a school

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, airport and apartments.

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what is shown in the previous diagram, the shop is situated in the centre of the area.

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the southern

side

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there is

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farmland

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forests are ahead of the farm. Houses are located adjacent to the shop. In terms of the current plan, houses are transformed into several shops

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a school is the central part. In front of the

shops

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they established apartments

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the airport is next to the

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northern

forest. In the south part of the layout, they

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part of the forest and assembled a variety of apartments.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

159 words

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shopping mall
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river
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tourism
leisure activities
transportation infrastructure
roads
roundabout
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industrial area
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The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV shows. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

should long term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they can give something back to the community?

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to these problems?