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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The table displays the
number
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 of individuals from five
countries
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 in Europe who live in each other
countries
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 in the year 2011.
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, Poland is the highest in living in other
countries
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 whilst it is the lowest in the
number
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 of
people
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 who live in it. Germany is the highest in the total
number
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 of individuals who live in it.
Spanish
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 is the lowest in the total of its citizens who live outside it. A large
number
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 of Polish
people
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 live in British with just above half a million. Just 71
thousand
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Spanish
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 citizens live in British. Italian citizens are the highest
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 living in Germany with 556
thousand
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. Only 112
thousand
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Spanish
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 who live in Germany. Most of the
people
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 who live in Italy are Polish with 106
thousand
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. Just 19,000
Spanish
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people
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 live in Italy It is seen from the table that only 6000
people
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 live in Polish and most of them are German with 4000.
Spanish
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 is the third nation in the total of
people
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 who live in it with 861
thousand
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 and the highest
number
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 of them is British with 391
thousand
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. The total
number
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 of
people
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 who live in different
countries
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 is 3 million and Polish is the highest with 1,168,000 whilst
Spanish
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 is only 202.107
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