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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts how much
milk
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 are produced yearly in four countries in three different year (1990, 2000, 2010).
Overall
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, it is obvious from table that the Netherlands'
production
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 was the highest among other countries and Guatemala has the least amount of
milk
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production
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 compared to others. On the one hand, the Netherlands illustrate above 11million
litres
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 of diary
production
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 in all of the given years.
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 number
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 increased from 11,262,000
litres
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 in 1990 to 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010. Australia was the second nation that the amount of produced
milk
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 was 11,246,000 in 1990.
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,
this
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 number decreased slightly, became 11,105,000 in 2000, and 9,165,000 in 2010.
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, Tanzania and Guatemala shows a rise over given years. In Tanzania, the
production
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 of
milk
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 was 87,000 in 1990 and it increased to 1,55,000 in 2010.
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 Guatemala has the least amount of
milk
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production
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 in 1990 by 26,000
litres
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, it rose and became over the half million in 2000, and 84,000 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, production, litres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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