The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table expresses data about the number of inhabitants of New Zealand during one year by
age
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group
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from 2011. It can be seen from the table that the majority of
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list consists of mature individuals aged between 15 and 39,
while
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people
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over 65 indicate the lowest result.
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, in 2011, the population of adolescents was 898.160; after the year, it declined to 896.364.
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, mature individuals had the same result during the year, and the number of
people
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was 1.574.102. These
people
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have a larger population in New Zealand than others. Individuals in the 40 and 64
age
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group
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had 1.331.907 in 2011;
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, in 2012, the number of these citizens rose gradually. Compared with all ages, the 40 and 64
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group
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and all ages had the same proportion of change, 0.6% % respectively. The highest increase of the whole
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group
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between 2011 and 2012 indicated old mature
people
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who were over 65, and the portion of the surge contained 4%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "indicate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population growth
  • age group
  • increase
  • decline
  • elderly population
  • aging population
  • working-age population
  • stable labor force
  • modest increase
  • significant change
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