The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
sales
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of
bread
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,
buns
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,and
pies
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which are the top three items sold in a certain bakery by
customers
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in 2014.
Overall
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,
bread
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was highly popular among the
customers
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,
while
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buns
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were the least purchased in 2014.
On the other hand
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,
pies
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sales
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grew significantly throughout the year,
while
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customers
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purchasing
buns
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declined.
Bread
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sales
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experienced fluctuations. In January 2014,the bakery was mostly popular with
bread
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,as they were earning $80,000.00 from the selling of
bread
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.
While
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they were getting the least amount of
sales
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from
pies
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as it was only. $10,000.00.
However
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, the
sales
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of
bread
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experienced a rapid decrease reaching just above $40,000.00 in March.Throughout the period between March and July, the
sales
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of
bread
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fluctuated.Yet,the
sales
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of
bread
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rose, and in the
last
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month, the
sales
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of
bread
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were just as in January.
Nevertheless
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,the
customers
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purchasing of
pies
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rose throughout the years,from 10,000.00$ to. January to 40,000.00$
at the end
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of the period.
On the other hand
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,the
sales
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of
buns
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fluctuated as it was $40,000.00 at the beginning of the year,and grew steadily to $70,000 in May,where
then
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the
sales
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remained stable for 4 months. After that, it declined rapidly reaching $30,000.00 in December,making
buns
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the least items that were sold in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, bread, buns, pies, customers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 2 times.
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