It could be argued that technology makes our lives easier and simpler. But there are certainly people who feel life has become more complicated due to modern inventions. Which opinion do you agree with? In your essay, include supporting details.
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use
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people
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also
feel that certain aspects of life have been overcomplicated Linking Words
due to
the rise of technological Linking Words
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although
certain life aspects are more accessible, in general, Linking Words
technology
has made life more complex and cumbersome. Use synonyms
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is because the Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
technology
assumes that everyone possesses an electronic device, which is a great assumption since not everyone may have the means to purchase one. Use synonyms
Also
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for
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example
the older generation, it can be an arduous process to onboardAdd the comma(s)
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such
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things
they can do in Use synonyms
such
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technological
driven environment, where payments are made electronically and registrations for appointments are made online. Change the adjective
technologically
This
can be caused by a myriad of factors, but the most prominent Linking Words
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obviously economic and social factors. Correct subject-verb agreement
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For example
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people
from low economic classes may not have the Use synonyms
priviledge
of owning smartphones, Correct your spelling
privilege
thus
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also
be the case that certain age groups may not be exposed to Linking Words
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such
devices, Linking Words
thus
limiting their mobility and flexibility in travelling around.
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use
, possibly requiring external assistance for Use synonyms
people
from older generations. Certain applications that are used for mobile banking and transportation can be difficult to set up, even for technologically savvy Use synonyms
people
from the younger generation. Use synonyms
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things
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such
as registration for doctor appointments, making reservations, Linking Words
ordering
from a restaurant, among other Correct word choice
and ordering
things
.
In conclusion, I believe that more often than not, Use synonyms
technology
has a way of overcomplicating Use synonyms
things
rather than simplifying them. Use synonyms
This
is because there Linking Words
barriers
to entry to accessing the positive fruits of Add a missing verb
are barriers
technology
, which are technological ownership and understanding of its platforms.Use synonyms
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