The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The vertical bar chart shows data on spending
of
weekly Change preposition
on
salary
by families between 1968 and 2018.
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salaries
Overall
, the highest spending of weekly income by families was on food supplies, Linking Words
while
the lowest spending was on personal goods Linking Words
as well as
on fuel and power supplies.
In 1968 the spending on food supplies was 35%, Linking Words
while
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this
had a rapid reduction being about 16-17%. Linking Words
However
, spending Linking Words
for
leisure in 1968 was around 8-9%, facing a rapid increase of 22% in 2018. Change preposition
on
Same
situation happened in spending for both transport and housing between 1968 and 2018. The spending Change the article
The same
for
transport was approximately 7% rising to 13-14% and spending on housing was roughly 10% increasing to 18-19% respectively.
The lowest spending by families was for fuel and power, clothing and footwear Change preposition
on
as well as
personal goods. In 1968 spending for these were in peak around 6%, 10%,Linking Words
8
% respectively. But, in 2018 all of them troughed to 4%, 5% and 4%. Correct word choice
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However
, only spending for household goods were the same being approximately around 8% between 1968 and 2018.Linking Words
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