The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise and make comparisons where relevant.

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sugar

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is made from

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cane.

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, the process of making

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consists of seven definitive stages, and they are : growing

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canes, harvesting them, transporting them to

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where they undergo crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and

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drying and cooling phase. To start with, the

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canes need 12 to 18 months to reach the desired growth as farmers harvest them manually or by vehicles designed for

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purpose. After that, the harvested canes are

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moved to the crushing stage where they are placed in a machine to extract juice.

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, by using

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filter, the juice is

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purified to remove any debris.

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, the following phase will consist of putting the purified juice in an evaporator in order to transform it into a syrup by eradicating water. Meanwhile, the

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syrup is moved into the centrifuge

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its main role is to separate

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crystals from the syrup.

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, the

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is left in large containers to dry and cool.