The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about the mean of weekly expenditures by families in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the majority of Linking Words
families
spending is on food. Change noun form
families'
family's
In addition
, in 2018 people spent mainly on Linking Words
lesuire
, Fix the agreement mistake
lesuires
whereas
in 1968 expenses of Linking Words
lesuire
were limited.
Fix the agreement mistake
lesuires
According to
what is shown, in 1968, 35% of Linking Words
households
expenditure was on food, Fix the agreement mistake
household
while
only 10% on housing. Linking Words
Additionally
, around 7% of their spending was on fuel and power, Linking Words
Linking Words
however
tenth of their income was spent on clothing. People spent an Correct word choice
and however
equivelant
proportion Correct your spelling
equivalent
in
household and personal goods with a total of nearly 7%.
In terms of 2018, more than a fifth of their expenditure was on leisure, Change preposition
on
while
less than 5% was on transport. Linking Words
Moreover
, approximately 8% of Linking Words
families
income was spent on household goods, Change noun form
families'
family's
whereas
less than 5% was on personal items. In Linking Words
comparision
with the low Correct your spelling
comparison
expeenditure
on housing in 1968, nearly Correct your spelling
expenditure
fifth
of the weekly income was spent on housing. Correct article usage
a fifth
Furthermore
, fuel and clothing expenses were 5% and 4% respectively.Linking Words
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