Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is no denying the fact that each country needs a variety of professions to stimulate the growth of
economy
. Add an article
the economy
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an interest
also
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I will discuss both views and express my own opinion.
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To begin
with, some people claim that they must work in the same country that they trained in Linking Words
due to
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In other words
, professionalists feel grateful for the services offered by the nation and they aim to benefit society. Linking Words
Moreover
, having a work experience in Linking Words
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educated country will have a positive impact on a person’s knowledge. Correct your spelling
well
For example
, working in the medical sector in Linking Words
UK
is beneficial Correct article usage
the UK
due to
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excellence
medical institutions.
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excellent
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apply
employmeent
opportunities that Correct your spelling
employment
offers
well services.It is Change the verb form
offer
also
possible to say finding jobs that provide high salaries, good Linking Words
traning
and incentives will attract employees to join. Correct your spelling
training
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also
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employees
development. Fix the agreement mistake
employee
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, enhancing communication, technical and personal skills improvement is Linking Words
vital
requirement
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to believe
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that offers a well Change preposition
apply
traning
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training
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coherence
Some sentences could be clearer with more precise word choice and grammar corrections, such as improving phrases like 'professionalists feel grateful for the services offered.'
task response
Elaborate on examples to make them more relevant and specific to the discussion. For instance, you mentioned 'working in the medical sector in the UK' without detail on how this impacts personal career development.
task response
The essay adequately covers both viewpoints and presents a balanced opinion.
coherence
The introduction grabs attention and sets up the discussion effectively, while the conclusion appropriately summarizes the main points and presents a decisive stance.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.