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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The multiple bar chart illustrates the results of
survey
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a survey
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 conducted
for measuring
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to measure
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 the shares of customers who purchase instant
coffee
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,
fresh
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and fresh
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coffee
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 during 4 weeks, or goers to
coffee
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 during
same
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the same
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 time in 5 Australian
city
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cities
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 (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, Hobart).
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, Melbourne is the city, where its citizens are inclined to go to
cafe
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cafes
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 more than other regions on the graph,
whereas
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 the residents of
Adelaide
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 had the lowest number of visitors to cafe shops. The chart
also
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 shows that spending on fresh
coffee
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 was higher in Sydney,
while
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 the lowest buying rate of fresh
coffee
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 is in Brisbane The fresh
coffee
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 customers’s share holds the largest portion in the each of
cities
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 except
Adelaide
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, and
this
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percentage
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 changes in about 50-65
percentage
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interval
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.
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, instant
coffee
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 lovers are
great
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a great
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 portion of the
cities
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’ population and they follow the fresh
coffee
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 buyers’ results as the second largest share. One exception is
Adelaide
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 where
population
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the population
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 is inclined to choose instant type of
coffee
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. Approximately,45-55
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percentage
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per cent
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 of these towns prioritize drinking fast
coffee
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. The
last
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 segment associated with the visitors of
cafe
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the cafe
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 is the least
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option in each of
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cities
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the cities
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. These figures are quite different, but
generally
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generally,
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 they fluctuate between roughly 33-43
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percentage
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per cent
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 of whole survey participants in depicted
cities
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. In
the
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apply
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conclusion, the multiple bar chart reveals significant differences in
proportion
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the proportion
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 of drinking habits across the Australian
cities
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide, cities, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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