The bar chart shows percentage of people in a European country going to cinemas on different days. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows percentage of people in a European country going to cinemas on different days. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the graph provided reveals the proportion of cinema-goers during a week in a given European nation in 2003, 2005 and 2007. In general,
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people tended to enjoy watching movies in
cinemas
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at weekends, a slight number preferred going to
such
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places during weekdays. It is evident from the information supplied that Saturdays were the most popular day to go to the
cinemas
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, comprising 27%, 28% and 29% of attendees to
cinemas
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in 2003, 2005 and 2007 respectively. Meanwhile, Sundays and Fridays were at the second and third stages respectively; because approximately 22% and 17% of attendees went to
cinemas
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on those days during the three studied years. In stark contrast,
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, the other days of the week including Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday were unpopular for individuals to spend their time in
cinemas
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. Since the percentage of audiences on those days reached hardly 11% in all the years.
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