The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the production of
making
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sugar
from Use synonyms
sugar
cane. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are seven stages that require various tools and components during the process, whether it is mechanical or manual, from the Linking Words
sugar
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canes
to becoming Use synonyms
sugar
.
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Sugar
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canes
, after growing for 12 to 18 months, are harvested by the farmers in two different ways, which are using a machine that automatically takes out the Use synonyms
sugar
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canes
or a manual way by cutting them out with hands and sharp tools. Afterwards, the Use synonyms
sugar
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canes
are put into a crusher that converts them into Use synonyms
juice
. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
juice
undergoes a purifying process by utilizing a limestone filter, which results in Use synonyms
juice
drops.
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Next,
the evaporator is used to turn the Linking Words
juice
drops into syrup, which is heated to release steam from a hole on top of it. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
sugar
crystals are separated properly from the syrup by using a centrifugal movement. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
sugar
crystals are stored in a barrel to make them dried and cooled until they become Use synonyms
sugar
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes, juice with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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