The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarize the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps describe the transformation of
Correct your spelling
the
t he
Lakeside Correct your spelling
the
town
from 2000 to 2009
Use synonyms
Overall
, the map became less residential and more modern with the disappearance of the old Linking Words
town
, replaced by offices and a university. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the lake is smaller and Linking Words
became
a pond.
First of all, on the left side of the river, the Wrong verb form
has become
town
had 2 residential areas on Use synonyms
this
side. After that 9 years, the residential area in the north stayed unchanged Linking Words
while
the counterpart was replaced by a brand-new shopping centre. The art centre between 2 housing areas Linking Words
also
changed to the cinema. The derelict warehouse which is Linking Words
to
the top of the map was transformed into a car park. The old Change preposition
at
town
which is to the south of the car park was converted into offices and a university respectively to meet the education and employment Use synonyms
demand
of the citizens. The school which is near the river has remained unchanged. Fix the agreement mistake
demands
Secondly
, the lake which is in the top-right corner of the Linking Words
town
became smaller and turned into Use synonyms
the
small pond. Correct article usage
a
Finally
, on the right side of the river, the Linking Words
town
had a residential area which vanished Use synonyms
by
the expansion Change preposition
because of
by
an industrial complex.Change preposition
of
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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