The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart provides key information about the results of different
services
of evaluations that were taken by patients at Longston Use synonyms
Centre
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Peveril
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Centre
, and Marchbank Use synonyms
Centre
. The units are measured in numbers to represent the scores of the survey.
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Overall
it is clear from the graph that Linking Words
Peveril
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Centre
had the highest score, compared to Longstone Center.
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According to
the graph, Langston Linking Words
Centre
had the lowest Use synonyms
overall
average accounting for 5.8 Linking Words
due to
several low evaluation rates regarding the Linking Words
services
provided Use synonyms
such
as booking appointments 5.2 which is significantly low compared to other centres
In terms of Linking Words
Peveril
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Centre
and Marchbank Use synonyms
Centre
there was competition between them but what really affected the results for Marchbank Use synonyms
Centre
was the rating of the following Use synonyms
services
:
Response to concerns, pharmacy and booking appointments if they work on that they can manage to achieve better Use synonyms
services
.
In summary, Use synonyms
Peveril
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Centre
has the best rating.Use synonyms
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