The graph below shows information about the use of public transpotation in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016

The graph below shows information about the use of public transpotation in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016
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The line graph illustrates the trends of public transportation usage in 2016 in one country, which are divided by
age
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and location.
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, both patterns in two different areas fluctuated, and the highest percentage was held by the large city residents,
while
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the other residents remained lower in all
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groups, except in the 61 to 75
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old group. The proportion of people aged 31 to 45
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old in the large city was the greatest compared to the other categories, which was close to 70%.
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was followed by the
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group of 16 to 30
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old at about 50%, indicating a substantial difference between those groups. Notably, the percentages of individuals
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were 0 to 15
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old and 46 to 60
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old who used mass transportation were almost the same at around 40%.
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, the number was significantly lower for people who were 61 to 75
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old, with only 10%. In the other residents, the number of individuals who were aged 16 to 30
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old and used public transportation was the biggest with slightly under 30%, which only has a small difference with people aged 61 to 75
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old. In comparison, other categories were nearly the same at above 10%, unless the
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group of more than 76
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old, which was less than 10%.
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