The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table and pie chart illustrate the London
police
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budget in a specific location which was provided in 3 different ways, and the
police
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expenses in three sections over two years.
Overall
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,
while
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the
police
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income increased in 2018, the
money
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was given by the national
government
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top-ranked. Meanwhile, salaries for officers and staff were the highest expenditure in both years, the proportion of
this
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section decreased in 2018. The
money
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was provided for the
police
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by the national
government
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and taxes grew by 2m
pounds
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and 11m
pounds
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, respectively.
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, the amount of
money
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received from the national
government
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was the major income with 175.5m
pounds
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in 2017, and was higher than the 91.2m
pounds
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earned from taxes in 2017. Taxes raised more in
money
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donations than the national
government
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. The most expenses were for providing salaries in the
police
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station which included 75% of their budget in 2017
while
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this
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amount had a minimal reduction by 6% in 2018.
Although
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technology was the least expenditure for
this
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department(8%) in 2017, it nearly doubled in 2018.
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, the proportion of building and transport remained stable at 17% in both years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words police, money, government, m, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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