Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages to it
In
current
world, Add an article
the current
importance
of Add an article
the importance
computer
is growing very high for educational purposes. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
This
essay is an attempt to introspect both the positive and negative sides of Linking Words
computer
as a part of education.
When taking into consideration the Fix the agreement mistake
computers
usage
of Use synonyms
computer
for literacy there are too many benefits. Among them, one positive impact Fix the agreement mistake
computers
that
the students are aware of the technologies growing up. Add a missing verb
is that
This
would mean that there are Linking Words
number
of technologies discovered every day, Change the article
a number
the number
children
get to know about these from many sources of educational websites. Correct word choice
and children
Likewise
, Linking Words
scholar
use Fix the agreement mistake
scholars
internet
to get access to practical skills via YouTube channels. Add an article
the internet
For example
, Industries like Linking Words
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Byjus
post pandemic
as they offer online practical skills. These are Add a hyphen
post-pandemic
couple
of reasons why many approve Change the article
a couple
Use synonyms
usage
of computers for literacy.
Add an article
the usage
However
, there are disadvantages too. The first downside often experienced is getting exposed to several scams. To explain, internet devices are often surrounded Linking Words
with
suspicious Change preposition
by
attack
which often leads to Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
lose
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loss
money
. Another repercussion Change preposition
of money
that is
witnessed is in terms of students Linking Words
get
addicted to adult Wrong verb form
getting
contents
. To substantiate with an example, it could be cited that a recent article stated Fix the agreement mistake
content
usage
of porn Use synonyms
of
websites Change preposition
on
are
highly increased by youth below 18 years.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
To conclude
, it is accepted that Linking Words
Use synonyms
usage
of technological gadgets for literacy is a subject that has both positive and negative sides to it. In the future, it is anticipated that Correct article usage
the usage
this
trend is likely to continue.Linking Words
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language
Be cautious with grammatical and lexical accuracy, such as 'usage of computer for literacy' instead of 'usage of computers for literacy.'
language
Proofread for consistency in subject-verb agreement and pluralization (e.g. 'computer is' should be 'computers are').
coherence
Consider adding more varied connectors and transitions to enhance the flow of your arguments.
structure
The introduction clearly sets up the topic and outlines the intention to discuss both positive and negative aspects.
task response
Both sides of the argument are explored with relevant examples, such as the advantage of learning through Byjus and the disadvantage of exposure to online scams.
structure
The concluding paragraph neatly wraps up the arguments and suggests an ongoing relevance.
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