The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram compares the cuttiing tools used in 1.4 (A) and 0.8 (
B
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) million years ago by illustrating their front, side, and back views.
Overall
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, the cutting tools did not evolve much in terms of size, evidenced by the fact that both tools had a height of approximately 9 centimeters.
Conversely
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, they had experienced significant transformations in various aspects
such
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as colour, shape, and sharpness over the 0.6-million-year period. Speaking of colour, the
tool
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used in 1.4 million years ago displayed a darker shade comparing to the newer
tool
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, which was in a brighter colour close to grey, indicating they were made of different materials. Shape-wise, by observing their front and back,
tool
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A was carved into a triangle
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B
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had a diamond-like shape. Turning to their effectiveness, it's notable that
tool
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A was significantly thicker than
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B
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, with a width of 2 centimeters and a triangle-shaped side view.
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,
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B
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was polished to have sharper edges and needle-like ends, making it more productive in cutting activities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, tool with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stone Age
  • tools
  • cutting
  • development
  • rudimentary
  • sophisticated
  • progression
  • unworked pebbles
  • flake tools
  • bifacial tools
  • efficiency
  • materials
  • emergence
  • characteristics
  • functionality
  • craftsmanship
  • precision
  • hunting
  • carving
  • advancements
  • significance
  • human development
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