The chart and graph below giove information about sales and share prices for coca cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart and graph below giove information about sales and share prices for coca cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons where relevant.

The presented pie and line charts compare data about how much

Coca-Cola

Use synonyms

sold in 5 various continents in 2000 and its price from 1996 to 2001.

Overall

Linking Words

, it was important that most salads were in North America in 2000 and the trends of price increased over the period of 5 years.

According to

Linking Words

the pie diagram, all

Coca-Cola

Use synonyms

that drank all over the world reported 17 tons in 2000. North America, the main area that had drunk most

Coca-Cola

Use synonyms

, formed 30.4%;

Then

Linking Words

Latine America constituted just over a quarter. Europe and Asia respectively composed 20.5% and 16.4%;

then

Linking Words

Africa and the Middle East made up a small fraction. The line graph demonstrates that the price of

Coca-Cola

Use synonyms

hit nearly 35 in the beginning;

thereafter

Linking Words

, it rose significantly to just under 70 in 1997;

however

Linking Words

, it reduced moderately to roughly 60

at the end

Linking Words

of 1997.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, it leapt sharply and reached the vertex at approximately 80 in 1998 after that, it dropped somewhat to almost 50 in 2000, but it grew to roughly 60 in 2001.

maryamkazemi968

Jan 11, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Vocabulary: Replace the words coca-cola with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

176 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

sales trend
share prices
seasonal fluctuations
correlation
global events
market analysis
consumer behavior
economic factors
investment decisions
financial performance

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work You should write at least 150 words.
I hope you are doing well. I am delighted to know that you have enrolled for the voluntary work at a festival. I am writing this letter to gather some information regarding the program and to know if there is any vacancy available.
6
band
Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.
All adults like to study in another country.Because studying abroad may be one of the most beneficial experiences. But some parents worry about their children and do not allow them to study abroad. I believe that studying abroad has more positive sides than learning another culture and another experience.
7.5
band
Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem?
A lot of people face more struggles when they enter a university than when they study at school. This state of affairs can be attributed to several factors and this essay will suggest several viable solutions to remedy the situation.
6.5
band
There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter, introduce yourself, explain what the problem is, and tell the councilors what you would like to be done.
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing about the problems on the road outside my house. My address is 271 Halloween Street, Los Angeles, USA. I chose your councillor because of the positive review and reputation of responsibilities.
7.5
band
You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: • explain why you chose to study English at the school • describe the problems you had with the lessons • suggest how the classes could be improved You do NOT need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to provide you with feedback about the English course which I completed last week. Overall, I must say there is room for improvement.

The chart and graph below giove information about sales and share prices for coca cola. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad, and give your own opinion about whether it is a good idea.

Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem?

There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter, introduce yourself, explain what the problem is, and tell the councilors what you would like to be done.