The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates the
town
of Garlsdon, which has a Use synonyms
population
of 65,000Use synonyms
,
and shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a proposed supermarket. The locations are evaluated based on proximity to key areas, Remove the comma
apply
population
centres, and accessibility.
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Overall
, S1 is situated on the northwest outskirts of the Linking Words
town
, near the countryside and close to the main road leading to Hindon, Use synonyms
while
S2 is centrally located within the Linking Words
town
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centre
. Each site has distinct advantages and drawbacks in terms of accessibility, target Use synonyms
population
, and impact on nearby areas.
S1, located 12 kilometres from Hindon (Use synonyms
population
10,000), is directly connected via a main road, making it accessible to residents of Hindon Use synonyms
as well as
Garlsdon’s suburban Linking Words
population
. Its position near the countryside ensures sufficient space for construction, but it may be less convenient for those living in the Use synonyms
town
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centre
, as it is on the outskirts. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the lack of railway connections nearby might limit its accessibility for people from more distant towns like Bransdon and Cransdon.
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In contrast
, S2 is centrally located within Garlsdon's Linking Words
town
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centre
, a no-traffic zone. Use synonyms
This
makes it easily reachable for local residents and those using the railway, as Garlsdon is connected to Bransdon (16 km away, Linking Words
population
15,000) and Cransdon (25 km away, Use synonyms
population
29,000) via train. Use synonyms
However
, being in the Linking Words
town
Use synonyms
centre
might pose challenges for customers driving to the supermarket, given the no-traffic restrictions, and it could lead to congestion in the surrounding areas.Use synonyms
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