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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

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The chart presents data about the average monthly temperatures and rainfall in Kolkata throughout the
year
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. It can be observed that the rainy seasons for Kolkata happened between June and September,
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 winter in Kolkata only experienced a few amounts of rain.
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, the temperatures are relatively warm throughout the
year
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. January is the coldest month in the
year
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, with only 20 degrees Celcius. Afterwards, the temperature rises gradually and reaches its peak in May. It
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 witnessed a consistent decline back to the same level as January in the final month of the
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. The average precipitation in January stands at approximately 20
millimeters
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 and increases steadily in the former half of the
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, compared to the opposite trend in the latter half of the
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. Noticeably, the accumulated amount of its rainy season is over 1000
millimeters
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, which accounts for over two-thirds of the annual amount of rainfall.
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introduction conclusion
Ensure that the introduction provides a clear overview, and consider including a conclusion to summarize key points.
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Expand on the analysis of the data, clarifying the link between temperature and rainfall trends.
logical structure
The essay presents a clear and logical structure, with a smooth progression of ideas.
clear comprehensive ideas
Provides a comprehensive description of precipitation trends, highlighting essential rainfall patterns.

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